Topic: My University life
Organization: Comparison
My University life is very colorful and interesting. First, there are more activities that
I can participate than I was in high school. Such as the camping, club. They are all very funny. Second, I can meet the friends that come from every place but not just in one city. In high school, our classmates are all from Hsin-Chu. I just can make friends with Hsin-Chu people. Now, I can make new friends from all over Taiwan. Last, I can learn deeper knowledge and more ways about getting well along with others than I was in high school.
Topic: My University life
Organization: Time order
I have a plan about my university life. When I am a freshman, I want to keep concentrating on my current study in order to build a solid foundation for the further education. When I am a sophomore, I hope I can learn second language so that I can enhance my language ability. When I am in third and fourth grades, I need to purse the master degree and continue gaining more English knowledge.
Topic: My University life
Organization: Cause-effect
I spent a lot of money buying things about the university life. I needed to buy the computer to do my assignments so that I had to spend lots of money. Besides, I had to pay out some money to get new camera in order to take pictures for many activities. Last, I spent lots of money buying lots of articles for daily use so that I have enough things to use.
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Hi Tina:
I love your topic very much.You can have more beautiful essay, if you cut the "organization" out.It will become more perfect!
Sabrina
Hellow Tina!! Your life sounds colorful and interesting through your writing. If you can connect your organization clearer, I think it will be better.
靜誼
Hey, I am Ashley or Ya-rong Chen.
Your blog's article is good.
But I think you don't need to type the homework that the teacher wanted.
By the way, we have a nice talking on the way to the class.
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